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This excerpt is from a previously published novella that is looking for a new home, but is in the midst of being re-edited.

Chase quietly opened the door at her Mom’s house and snuck through the kitchen. She wanted to get into the house without the fuss that usually greeted her arrival.
“Chase, what are you doing skulking in the kitchen?†Her mother’s voice came from behind her.
Chase paused and looked back. “I wasn’t skulking Mom, I was merely trying to get a glass of water.†Grabbing the nearest glass, she headed towards the water cooler.
Her mother cocked an eyebrow. “Well, you might want to try a clean glass then.†She took it out of Chase’s hand and set it down. “Really Chase, there are refreshments in the living room. We have all been waiting on you to get started. Let’s go.†She walked out of the room.
Chase followed slowly and watched her mother’s back, taking in the beautiful cream silk blouse and black pin-striped slacks. Put together as always and not a hair out of place. Looking down at herself, she noticed there were already wrinkles in her pants. And, somehow, she’d spilled something on her top, probably the takeout she had eaten in the car on the way over. Eaten in secret and haste, because it was never good to be too hungry around her family. Besides making her cranky no one really ate and therefore they treated her oddly whenever she had more than one bite of anything. Chase never understood why there was always so much food around, but no one ate it. It was a complete waste.
When they entered the living room, her mother pointed to a chair beside her brother and said, “Sit.â€
Chris nudged her when she sat down. “Ha, I knew you would come. Couldn’t resist it could you? I’ve been hearing whispers that old Grandma actually had some money somewhere.â€
Chase shook her head in disgust. “Chris, you really take the cake, you know? Grandma was wonderful to you, to all of us, and all you can think about is whether you going to get any money now?â€
“Your holier than thou act isn’t working today, Chase. You obviously want what’s coming to you. Why else are you here?â€
“I wouldn’t be if some guy, who claims to be the executor of Grandma’s will, hadn’t called and forced me to come. I don’t want her money. I’d rather have her back.â€
“Ssshhh,†hissed their mother, making the face that said they were making a spectacle of themselves. And therefore her.
A man at the front of the room cleared his throat to get everyone’s attention. Chase glanced up. He was tall, dark and gorgeous. She guessed him to be over six feet, with dark brown hair that had a slight wave to it. Not too short or too long, but it suited him perfectly. She caught a flash of beautiful green eyes as he looked around the room and waited for everyone to settle down. Maybe they were contact lenses–they were much too bright to be real.
“Excuse me, but I’d like to get started.†When he spoke, Chase realized it was the voice on the phone. Ahhh, Mr. Weston. Nice to see his looks matched his voice. That seldom happened in her world.
“My name is Reece Weston. I’m here representing the estate of Mrs. Nancy Chase Taylor. She had asked me to gather you all here and take care of certain matters for her.â€
“Yeah, right, scammer,†Chris muttered under his breath.
Surprised at his tone, Chase quickly glanced at him. “What do you mean?†she whispered. “Do you know this guy?â€
“Nah, no one seems to know him. He just suddenly appeared during Grandma’s last days. There’s talk that she was so taken with him she literally forgot about the rest of us.â€
“I was with Grandma a lot during the final days. She never mentioned this guy, and I never saw him.†Chase returned her gaze toward the front of the room, intent on hearing what Mr. Weston had to say.
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June 15th, 2009 at 6:58 am
Wait, so why didn’t she see this guy? Does this have para elements? … grrr… Now I have to know what is up.
June 15th, 2009 at 7:16 am
Great excerpt, MG! I love the name Chase. Happy Monday!
June 15th, 2009 at 8:11 am
I love the name Chase for a heroine. Very unusual! You’ve done a great job with the family dynamic, here. I’m intrigued and want to read more.
June 15th, 2009 at 11:23 am
Intriguing. I’d definitely read on to find out what her mom’s talking about and who this guy is. Nice job, MG!
June 15th, 2009 at 1:00 pm
I definitely get a sense of the connection between all the characters and you’ve stirred up a bit of mystery about Reese. Intriguing!
June 15th, 2009 at 3:46 pm
Oooh, I really want to see how this turns out, especially the little mystery behind Reese’s sudden appearance.
June 15th, 2009 at 4:58 pm
Ok you stopped it… and I wanted it to continue. More please. Love the name Chase btw and I’m with Inez… why doesn’t she see him? what’s up?
June 15th, 2009 at 5:10 pm
Great family interactions. Really want to know what comes next!
June 15th, 2009 at 5:32 pm
Ooh, darn it! I want to know what he says!!! Nice excerpt, you definitely caught my interest.
June 15th, 2009 at 6:46 pm
Nice excerpt. definitely hooked by what’s going to happen!
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June 16th, 2009 at 7:50 am
I love the name Chase! I have a hero with the same name
I’m wanting more on the guy that shows up. Got me thinking, ‘who is he?’ — I want more!
June 16th, 2009 at 1:15 pm
Great tension to start the story. Why do I get the impression there’s going to be some nasty family drama ahead? I want to find out more!